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I say a smile...
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I say a smile... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I say a smile is worth its weight in gold I say a smile can light the coldest room I say a smile can warm the blackest heart I say a smile can brighten the darkest hour I say a smile can redeem the cruelest word I say a smile can melt the saddest eyes I say because I know.. When you smile you leave a watermark of goodness for someone else to give ... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I say you made me smile Roniece nice |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you gorgeous girl! I love to smile  RDB |
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kaila Junior Member
since 2006-12-24
Posts 37PA |
Oh--I like the watermark image. kaila |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kaila... what a pretty name! thank you for your comment.. Happy New Year to you! RDB |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
smiles are the symbole of both ambiguity and delight. mysterious because of the nature of unsure pleasure, jubilant because the gender of smile is serendipity. so, can't there evil in a smile? does not the rapist smile while raping? does not the raped child smile when touched into unclean pleasures? always consider the whole, not just the good, but the evil also, of what you are writing. especially when considering the subject of smiles. (just giving my thoughts to your poem) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hmmm... good point Matthew - thank you for your comment.. my smiles don't hold any evil though, just goodness.. but I can see where you are coming from... thanks again for your comment, they are valued. Happy New Year to you RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, now I understand your eyes, enjoyed this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed Roniece! Lovely write! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Naw, you can't keep a smile all to yourself, it's meant to be shared. Enjoyed, Poet! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely Ms RDB.... when a smile is as pretty as yours... it does catch the eye of the world.... even a Cynic. MoonShadow |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
nicely said....enjoyed the smile~~**~~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
So nice! It's always nice to see a smile in a world of frowns..Nice job my sweets! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Now, this leaves me smiling! Very nice... misc |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling at you!  Sing in me muse... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
When you smile you leave a watermark of goodness for someone else to give ... Siyo Ronice Dawson-Bruce there is nothing more loving,and giving than a smile gifted from a heart to help the world to heal! Sigi!
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
A smile is like chicken soup for your face...looks good on the outside...warm and healthy on the inside! Keep on smilin' Bea  |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Loved this poem...it is really nice...excellent work Denis. |
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