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I Feel Her Still
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I Feel Her Still |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite I feel her Still I see her through a veil of years A mist, a cloud, a hail of tears I see her in a childish trance And often with a sparrows glance Sometimes a trivial in pass Sometimes within the looking glass Sometimes the warmth of odors smell She lives with me in every dwell She haunts the breeze that cools my face She lives in every living grace Holds my hand when I am ill And touches me till I am still Hover’s o’er the space I live Giving all that she can give Touching hints that stay in gray Long gone, but still my mind do stay She’s my first love as no other Yes, my caring, saintly mother |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a beautiful tribute to your mother Sy!  This is yet another favourite from you! Have a grand day dear friend.  Sing in me muse... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As well you should, and always will. God bless you, Sy  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is just so exquisitely done, beautiful bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweetly written Sy, M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww Sy mine's been gone for 26 years now and I still feel her thereoutstanding write! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well done.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Just one word should suffice pursuant to this 're-write' (which I had not read before).... superb! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful memory/s.....well said Sy  |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Siyo Symore Tabin,in tears I say Sigi from my heart for I too know grandmother is there always when my need is great!
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... just beautiful ! RDB |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, dear Sy. Hugs, Ethel Ethel's Creations...MySpace My new poetry website Ethel's Creations...poetry, etc. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful friends above I thank you deeply. You all add to the delight of my day. Thank you again |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy that's a piece of love work and it's beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You are a love. Happy New Year to you and yours. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And we feel her through you, her wonderful son with the loving heart. *S* What a beautiful tribute... just lovely!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you, missed you and Have a Happy New Year. |
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