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swallows of fog song
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swallows of fog song |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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honey wet saliva the fog swallows the morning on tiptoes it is serpentine beguiling your hem ends the shimmering swoon sweep touching edges and lifting cellophane wrapper unwrapping the woman sounds that linger and your eyes then when the amber speaks to them when you give the fog hounds the hidden of your hunger my mind begs for more but you finger my mouth closed and water my beard with sighs you seep the salt songs that lather my whispering echo ____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
honey wet saliva the fog swallows the morning on tiptoes it is serpentine beguiling your hem ends the shimmering swoon sweep touching edges and lifting cellophane wrapper unwrapping the woman sounds that linger and your eyes then when the amber speaks to them when you give the fog hounds the hidden of your hunger my mind begs for more but you finger my mouth closed and water my beard with sighs you seep the salt songs that lather my whispering echo mmmmm..... Mr Dark, these words speak to me in a way that could be very bad! enjoyed your work here... RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b...I shall scold them for being bad, thanks ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
shhh babe....am listening to the echoeing whispers in my mind... they linger there so lovely...mmmm hmmmm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thank you for watching the morning here |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' do cigars have cellophane wrappers? nice words here real nice |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Evocative and ghostly; well worth the read! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I agree.... well worth the read :} RDB |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing, how fogs shift from obscurity to magic! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thank you hon for the eyes _______________ ms quell, you bless me with your touch here, thank you ______________ ms b, would think the fog would make you smile wickedly _____________ ms sun, something about the hidden of the fog dogs when they run..thanks lady friend |
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