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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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What makes us indifferent To the similarities of one another Why is it that we can see all that is wrong but never that which is right are we so blind to all that we have before us that the obvious becomes blurred contemplating what we want but never really achieving what we need at what cost do we stop and restart our lives thinking what we will get is any better than all that we have Maybe the thought or hope is enough that we go forward looking for whatever it is we feel we are missing. Missing, that is the main idea. Is what we don’t have missing or should we see that it’s not what we don’t have that counts but those things that we do have in our lives that matters. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I have the answer to ONE of these: contemplating what we want but never really achieving what we need I think, in my own case, what I want always feels like a NEED--until I get what I want, then I NEED something else. crap. I'm tard.  I like this one alot Rich--it's loose, it flows, it's from the heart-- free verse suits you and this sort of stream of conscious thing from you is very nice. Happy Solstice. (Kiss a witch.)  |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks seren and did you notice my old name is working  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish mine were.  My new one doesn't seem to be serving me very well. *laughing* /pip/Forum96/HTML/003057.html the more things change, the more they stay the same, yanno?  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello Richard... I enjoyed your write! RDB |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
It's good to see you again...and I think I very much need to read this several times before I say anything else. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there was a point that I was engulfed in what I didn't have and it only made me miserable so I finally began to focus on what I did have (after a drinking problem and almost losing everything) made me a much happier person |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
RDB... Thank you Paula Been a long time nice to be back and i know is why the question run inside my head passing shadows Glad that you made it through |
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