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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2006-12-21 07:13 PM




Every Christmas we long
for the past of once was

how many can we touch
how many touch us:


~
last night the snow was falling
beautiful crystals of perfect
harmony

                           I thought of you
and how you would close
your eyes

breathe the flutter
of wonder and new birth
framed by      boughs of
serenity and peace

the faded marks
of something still


your stillness:
reminds me how the sea
sleeps and the music remains

                          I have always longed for that quiet
to practice letting go
but I am lost to the spelling
of love
when you would
bring your Tuesday tenderness
in strands of silk
for my palms  
to trace    

I dream still
of your touch
beyond the bend of earth
                          to the drops I can no longer hold
in spread of wing  

arise    from the roots that blend us


indeed holy night


where butterflies rest

~~**~~

    

© Copyright 2006 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
trutodaraiders
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1 posted 2006-12-21 07:21 PM


Your words where so gentle in this poem. Merry Christmas 2 u 2!
LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-12-21 08:39 PM


good Lord, I've missed reading you.  As I read each line, thinking, ok, this one should be highlighted, but as I kept reading, each new line was more paramont then the last...excellent writing lady...Merry Christmas and thank you for writing and sharing...
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3 posted 2006-12-21 11:11 PM


Lauren,
Just lovely. It is nice to recall...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-21 11:16 PM


Lauren.... this is just beautiful!!
Merry Christmas to you my sweet friend
RDB xx

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5 posted 2006-12-22 09:01 AM


Lady L, my precious friend...sometimes butterflies rest


and other times, like this?

They soar.....  

sis.

Happy Holidays L~

Pilgrimage
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6 posted 2006-12-22 10:11 AM


How very pretty.  Your images are bright and clear.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-12-22 11:06 AM


1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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