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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-12-21 12:53 PM



When you allow me to be
there, in that moment with you
it makes me wish that
I were there,
with you, alone

no walls,
no borders

no limitations

only the mirrored images
of our eyes meeting

with smiles.


your so smooth...

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Startime55
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1 posted 2006-12-21 01:08 PM


Absolutely stunning in the emotional power these words have....spoken so softly yet said with such powerful feeling....I felt these words for I have thought them myself but never could have said them so well....**BIG HUGS**
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-12-21 01:19 PM


Beautiful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-12-21 01:27 PM


Beautifully put Donna. I know this type of moment so well, and have wished it could last forever.
hugs to you sweetie, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Draugluin
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4 posted 2006-12-21 01:58 PM


Ah the moment when souls mingle in a crowded place, very, very special. Well done.
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-21 02:02 PM




ooohhh gentle Donna
we are on the same page again
and this my dear friend
is perfect!

you speak to me!  
hugs


Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-12-21 02:23 PM


ms gs, this always works for me, enjoyed it
JL
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7 posted 2006-12-21 02:25 PM


Beautiful write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2006-12-21 06:36 PM


oh this is wonderful!  RDB
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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2006-12-21 07:15 PM


how beautifully expressed.....

lovely this; lovely you...


LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-12-21 08:49 PM


and as it should be...you capture true love in full bloom...
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2006-12-22 09:35 AM


Karen dear lady, it is so good to see you
here again and thank  you for leaving
such a beautiful comment here at my words.
Thanks hon.


Interloper, Merry Christmas sweetie.

Yes Chris, exactly...if they could just last
a while longer....hugs you...


Draugluin, yes anytime that two souls can
touch is indeed special. Thanks for stopping in.

Kate sweetie, it pleases me so that
you listen and hear.  Yes...we are
again on the same page.....simpatico we are indeed..
Hugs you,

D, mmm hmmm works for me too...
Hugs'n'luv big daddy.

JL, thank you so much!

RDB, thank you for the wonderful, it is
appreciated.

Lady Lauren, my sis...
you touch so softly, thank you.
May you and yours have a wonderful holiday hon!


LeeJ, thank you so much and I just wanted to
say it is good to see you here.  Hugs sweetie.


May you each have a very safe, blessed
and happy Holiday season filled with love.
Hugs to all.  


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