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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-21 09:10 AM

             "Does She Think of Me?"

    Sometimes as I sit and ponder
        quiet thoughts that drift and wander
    to and fro and slowly lifting
        as if on clouds and softly drifting.

    Before the focus drifts away
        I wonder where she is today,
    a gentle friend that came to play...
        a Spirit from so far away.

    Then I recall the things we shared..
        revisited the places where
    the words were writ for all to see
        expressed, no less, in poetry.

    Again, I wondered at the end..
        where is the one that I called Friend..
    and, is that soul still flying free...
        and does she ever think of me.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-12-21 09:15 AM

Oh Ken..I'll bet she thinks of you often!

Wonderful piece of writing here!
Hugs~Nancy

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2006-12-21 09:15 AM

Loved the read Moonshadow. Nicely done

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-12-21 09:20 AM

I"m sure she does

beautiful write

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-12-21 09:38 AM

The eternal question...
Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-12-21 01:19 PM

absolutely she thinks of you!

nice work

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2006-12-21 01:28 PM

Why wouldn't she think of you?

Much enjoyed this Ken.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Draugluin
Junior Member

since 2006-12-08

Posts 48
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2006-12-21 02:02 PM

Good poem, made me ponder those i've loved and wonder if they still remember what i was like, back then. I have asked the same question before. Nice work.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2006-12-21 04:54 PM

Ken, who wouldn't think of you gorgeous boy! this was lovely

RDB

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2006-12-21 05:14 PM

Tru Thank you for the read and response.

    Draugluin and Interloper.... Exactly.

    Nancy, Passing Shadows and TheLady... I do hope so too... yet reality of Mundania has a tendancy to dampen and fog the fire of many a beautiful dream.

    Nightshade... dear Lady... Out of sight; too much distance... and time.. all are unkind to the body and the mind... taking their toll until some dreams remain only as a fleeting moment of 'forgotten' memories... and therefore only manifest as a momentary passing faint smile..

    RDB... Milady Thank you for your lovely vote of confidence. (Blush)

                MoonShadow

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

10 posted 2006-12-21 05:24 PM

beautifully done, I hope she is thinking of you...best wishes for a wonderful holiday season

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2006-12-21 07:20 PM

share this with her....

it's lovely

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2006-12-22 12:06 PM

Very beautifully written.
TD

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

13 posted 2007-08-01 10:07 AM

   Thank you LeeJ and TD.

    Greeneyes, Thanks... I think I will.

          MoonShadow
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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2007-08-01 12:46 PM

We never forget..

Enjoyed.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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