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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2006-12-21 07:14 AM


the back side of heaven's gate
has eye friendly curvey
slow motion voyeurism required
to enjoy the entry to pearly
without ol' pete's bordom

slow joe's tookillya with lime
gargle water and whiskey spit
just to make the rita's pretty
those long moments between curbs
and the street crossing hades

you brought me my favorite candy
dippin stiff from the wicky mind
hand rolled hungry sticks
from some tan thigh hideout
on the legal side of tampa

it was the thought that counted
but the presentation too was worthy
of a priest's perfect blessing
premature forgivness for future sins
and a hope to be along to spend them

on the momentary pleasure of madness
_______________

daark


scribblenote:  a place across the border and some antics with good cigars, tequilla, naughty music and short term memory loss (the long term kind)

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-21 07:26 AM


a place across the border and some antics with good cigars, tequilla, naughty music and short term memory loss (the long term kind)

hmm.... I think I would like to find that place across the border Mr Dark!  would you be likely to visit again soon?  LOL  RDB

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-12-21 07:36 AM


ms B...I hope to never leave soon.. thanks for peekin in
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-12-21 08:06 AM


the title grooved the middle eye to view a very pretty woman, in red silk and lace, dancing a salsa....very nice this morning D.
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-12-21 08:08 AM


I have to visit this place D, but am warning you that I might want to stay awhile.     Loved this one indeed big d....

your so smooth...

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2006-12-21 08:33 AM


ms leej, thank you for looking in..much color there yes.

______________

ms gs, you would be welcome I am sure ms, thanks

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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6 posted 2006-12-21 09:09 AM


Hey Im rollin down there 2..Since darks gots all the ladies coming down. Good job enjoyed the read. Thanks for the reminder

it was the thought that counted
but the presentation too was worthy
of a priest's perfect blessing
premature forgivness for future sins
and a hope to be along to spend them

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2006-12-21 09:17 AM


truto' thanks amigo, see you across the border
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
8 posted 2006-12-21 02:20 PM




Stranger darlin'
when you receive a gift
it's always the thought that counts
and that momentary pleasure of madness

and oh it is so pleasurable...

ummmm hmmmmmm


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2006-12-21 02:22 PM


ladyone..mmmm hmmm works for me babe!! thanks
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