Open Poetry #39 |
Don' t Tell Me That I'm Old |
Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Don’t Tell Me That I’m Old Don’t tell me that I am old For I am as young as you In spirit if not in flesh And thank God, my mind is true When you stop and chat with me Don’t shout into my ear My music isn’t deafening Like yours is my dear Don’t treat me like a child Because my hair has turned to grey Don’t notice all my wrinkles And hastily turn away Don’t dismiss advice That I sometimes give to you I’ve been down your road before And some respect is due Don’t roll your eyes to heaven Or laugh behind my back If I can’t keep up the pace For its energy I lack Don’t tell me that I’m old Though my years left are few My spirit is still the same And I’m as young as you! Copyright ©2006 Beatrice Boyle (All rights reserved) Grandma Bea [This message has been edited by Beatrice Boyle (12-23-2006 01:32 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hear Hear, you tell em Grandma Bea!! loved this!! RDB |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Roniece...I never thought I'd be a member of the oldies club...so...I decided not to join! By the way...what are you doing up at this hour...it's 4:25am here! Bea |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
no, no, I'm on Sydney time my sweet Grandma Bea... it's only 8.45pm here I'm wide awake enjoying a chardy! wanna join me? LOL |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed. I am up because I work nights.Take the word work lightly, my work is done within the first three hours. the rest of the time I am on watch duty at the front desk. martyjo |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Roniece, but only if you make it a glass of rose`...oh...and chill the glass please! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks "late". Which gives you plenty of time to compose some witty or interesting things for us night owls to read while courting the sandman! Bea |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
happily oblige my sweet Bea...glass is chilled and rose' is from New Zealand ... very nice drop! |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
A votre` Sante...nighty nite. Bea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious! |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Im 27 years old Beatrice, and i'd rather talk with the wiser. Loved the poem because you pointed out the obvious. Just because your older doesnt mean your dead. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVA! Well Done! Write on Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Ms Beatrice.. Nice write to shake up the generation gap. Bravo! Many times, when there is 'Snow on the Roof"... there is still a 'passionate, raging fire in the furnace'. >;-) MoonShadow |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Passing Shadows...so glad you dropped by...glad I brought a smile to your face. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks raiders...(my late son-in-law was a rabid raiders fan...as for me...GO GIANTS!) Don't know how wise I am...but I do like to pontificate every once in awhile! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thankks Interloper...I plan on it! Bea Grandma Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Well now moonshadow...I'll bet you can see the flames all the way over on the dark side of the moon! Bea |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Beatrice, Proof age is just a number! I thought all Raiders fans were rabid. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bea, truth is, I don't know how young people see me... for when I look into their beautiful eyes, I see me.... in great disguise... Thank you for a wonderful poem... and it is probably time that I act my "age". Oh, 47, forever! |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
Oh I just love this... |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Aloha James...so glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Larry...that's what they say about us GIANTS fans! Ho Ho Ho! Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Hi Sunshine, 47 sounds about right to me too! Bea |
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