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Truth Beyond Appearance
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Truth Beyond Appearance |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Sometimes I get so upset Can't seem to get it straight... some things I think are all wrong turn out to be OK Wonderin if you're what you seem because of things you do and say but then it does occur to me I just might be savin face... I wanna love you long and deep I wanna hold you and believe Every sweet word that you speak But my heart keeps failin me Are you the happiness I'm hearin Outside my gaurded door Are you truth beyond appearance The true love I'm lookin for |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
are you the dream I never dreamed all that I wasn't looking for? smile... sorry. I just felt like an ad lib.  It's always lovely to sing with you Eric.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eric...I enjoyed this write of yours... Merry Christmas my friend! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat little song here much enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
yep. But you'll never know unless you dive in. I like your song, it flows well, and speaks to me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Questions .... always questions  Now, for me, my friend, would you write a ballad with answers? puhleeeze Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I wanna love you long and deep I wanna hold you and believe Every sweet word that you speak But my heart keeps failin me" Eric someone told me recently... feel don't think it's worth a try excellent poem |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes you just gotta take a chance...I can hear this one playing soft in my mind. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to all of you for the lovely encouraging comments....It's a fictitional write but I appreciate the input very much.... Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always nice to read you, Eric Wishing you a happy holiday season M |
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