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spiked4
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0 posted 2006-12-20 08:58 AM


I wake and see your beautiful face
eyes closed
filled with grace
Soft and smooth
like a porcelean doll
your breathing sounds
as if to call
my heart to skip a precious beat
defenses down
again repeat
the flutter that
a heartbeat brings
is it pain or pleasure
it now sings
i close my eyes
a breathe retrieve
my senses for
some small reprieve
and know now
in the very end
my love for you
did not intend
to push you far away


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-12-20 12:08 PM


touching piece

I relate

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2006-12-20 12:47 PM


I am only sorry that sadness is your muse...

but you are writing from such a pure and lovely place--honest and touching.


spiked4
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3 posted 2006-12-20 01:41 PM


Thanks

[This message has been edited by spiked4 (12-21-2006 09:51 AM).]

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-12-20 03:12 PM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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