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| Open Poetry #39 |
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Far Away |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
I wake and see your beautiful face eyes closed filled with grace Soft and smooth like a porcelean doll your breathing sounds as if to call my heart to skip a precious beat defenses down again repeat the flutter that a heartbeat brings is it pain or pleasure it now sings i close my eyes a breathe retrieve my senses for some small reprieve and know now in the very end my love for you did not intend to push you far away |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching piece I relate |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am only sorry that sadness is your muse... but you are writing from such a pure and lovely place--honest and touching.  |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
Thanks [This message has been edited by spiked4 (12-21-2006 09:51 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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