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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Touch Touch pulled away leaving fingertips yearning, burning, stung by rejection, not understanding. In the dark of the room, beside me a space, a warmth on the sheet, empty now. Heart wondering whether to beat or not, hesitates, afraid to try again, then, a rustle in the dark, movement on the bed, and the space between us is empty no more. © w.james beard, jr. december 2006 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh nice imagery here... very nice! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching write  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hi Jimmy! Happy Holidays! Enjoyed this write as I do all of your offerings. hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh I really like the feeling this gave me. Good to read you again Jimmy.  ~May Peace be your gift at Christmas and your blessing all year through~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Forgiveness... that's how it came to me, Jimmie... And warmth. A lot of warmth.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley A sensitive write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
just as I was about to despair... "a rustle in the dark" exraordinary work |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Great Write |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, a sensitive and thoughtful write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very "touch"ing and sensitive write, Dear James! I love happy endings! ~ and new beginnings!  Love & Christmas Light, Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the touch of your words this morning, James~~ "and the space between us is empty no more." Have a wonderful holiday~~~  M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Well done. I could feel the cold spot, and then the relief when the rustle came. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a great write, a pleasure to read~ My spirit will rise |
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