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Dazed Go By
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Dazed Go By |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Dazed Go By I think I am dazed by your smile... But dazed have gone by, way too many. I only look at you two or three times a day… I enjoy the daydreaming, I really do. But how could that be good for anyone, as me, in my tattered shoes? Yet, that smile, and those gleaming green eyes, who could dare not be mesmerized? Not that I have lost control...Me? No, I just think about you, sometimes... Most of the time…When I’m free... You know… Free moments, during the day... Sometimes in the evening… but not too often... Just two or three times a day... I often have moments…What can I say? So I spend them on thoughts of you... So what?They’re my moments. Can’t I spend them that way? Being dazed... In the dazed I am with you... _____________________________  [This message has been edited by JL (12-21-2006 12:04 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem is beautiful...I love the way it flows with such gentleness of love...simply beautiful...**BIG HUGS** |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this stums a very special chord, reminding me of a woman playing a harp...and in the heart of man, lives woman...a Timeless Treasure...(wink) love your sense of humor, but most of all your dedication to friends... Merry Christmas Dearheart Hugs Lee J. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a great gift you give us JL...much applause, and laughter. Merry Christmas. TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
it's your "daze" my friend and no one can take it away....wonderful feeling, huh! Kool write... jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautifully penned ..and enjoyed .. RDB |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JL, your dazed state was absolutely bedazzling! I was smiling all the while!  You appear to be a man who knows how to appreciate a woman! Love & Christmas Light, EA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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