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JL
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0 posted 2006-12-19 02:52 PM


Dazed Go By

I think I am dazed by your smile...
But dazed have gone by, way too many.

I only look at you two or three times a day…
I enjoy the daydreaming, I really do.
But how could that be good for anyone,
as me, in my tattered shoes?

Yet, that smile, and those gleaming green eyes,
who could dare not be mesmerized?
Not that I have lost control...Me?
No, I just think about you, sometimes...
Most of the time…When I’m free...
You know… Free moments, during the day...
Sometimes in the evening… but not too often...
Just two or three times a day...

I often have moments…What can I say?
So I spend them on thoughts of you...
So what?They’re my moments.
Can’t I spend them that way?
Being dazed...
In the dazed I am with you...

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Startime55
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1 posted 2006-12-19 03:00 PM


This poem is beautiful...I love the way it flows with such gentleness of love...simply beautiful...**BIG HUGS**

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-12-19 03:05 PM


Well done

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-12-19 05:28 PM


this stums a very special chord, reminding me of a woman playing a harp...and in the heart of man, lives woman...a Timeless Treasure...(wink)

love your sense of humor, but most of all your dedication to friends...
Merry Christmas Dearheart
Hugs
Lee J.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2006-12-19 07:45 PM


What a great gift you give us JL...much applause, and laughter.
Merry Christmas.
TD

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2006-12-19 07:49 PM


it's your "daze" my friend and no one can take it away....wonderful feeling, huh!

Kool write...

jwesley

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-12-19 08:15 PM


very sweet
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2006-12-19 08:54 PM


beautifully penned ..and enjoyed .. RDB
Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-12-20 02:26 AM


JL, your dazed state was absolutely bedazzling! I was smiling  all the while!

You appear to be a man who knows how to appreciate a woman!

Love & Christmas Light,

EA


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-12-21 08:51 PM


Nice...James
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