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Broken Mind
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Broken Mind |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
Broken Mind I try so to remember just how I felt before you decided I'm not needed that someone needs you more so here I sit without you our children by my side they have no understanding of things I can't confide mommy isn’t happy she wants to find her way with us or without us as long as it’s her day to get all that she's wanted to ease her broken mind to see just what can surface behind the broken lines sometimes it just takes foresight to understand the whys but in the end indifference is all that’s left behind so go and mend your fences the world is there to see but when you find direction my love still waits for thee |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Achingly sweet words. Nice flow. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Richard... I feel your pain in this one... RDB |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I don't have the words (actually I do) and if I were inclined to share them they might sound like "She-does-not-deserve-you" um if I were inclined to speak my mind, that is...  and smile? Kiss the kids twice for me, and Makayla? "don't chew on daddy's power cord" come see us soon, love. This made my arms ache. ("She" is always welcome too--because, um. she'll be back.) Much love to you.  |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
Thank you Michael Pain and love much alike sometimes Thank you Roniece Dawson-Bruce seren i wait for her with arms wide open time will do as it will and whats left is what we have Thanx |
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