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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-12-18 08:24 AM


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Phantoms of My Sighs

I sleep within a flow of sighs
Feathered pillows and echo cries
The night has sent a host of ghosts
Phantoms that will roast the most

They oft into my sleeping mind
Some are soft and some unkind
All will offer pantomime
Each a field of separate time

They’re echoes of my day of real
With changes of my stays appeal
It’s roman orgy or a fear
But never ever very clear

I wallow in a field of seem
Or hide within a shadows dream
But ever busy sounding sighs
For some of them are outright lies

These dreams are robes of nightly dress
And I’m the king of acquiesce

© Copyright 2006 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
twinkyfl1
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1 posted 2006-12-18 08:53 AM


Sy, this was wonderful.

As Alice Cooper said "Welcome to my nightmare."

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-12-18 09:04 AM


I wallow in a field of seem
Or hide within a shadows dream
But ever busy sounding sighs
For some of them are outright lies

(sighs)
extraordinary this...enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-12-18 09:29 AM


twinkyfl1
Enjoyed the comment, thak you.

LeeJ
Thank you sweety and the top of the morning to yee.

Triskaidekaphobia
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4 posted 2006-12-18 09:42 AM


I really liked this Seymour... I couldn't tell you why exactly I just did.  lol

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-12-18 09:50 AM


Triskaidekaphobia
Love your honesty, thank you.

Beatrice Boyle
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6 posted 2006-12-18 02:33 PM


Loved this Sy...you are truly a wordsmith and a painter of words.

Bea

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-12-18 03:07 PM


Beatrice,
Painted in oils for many years. I just changed my medium and now use words. Thank you for the kind comment.

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-12-18 04:55 PM



dear king of acquiesce

I am in love with this one...


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-12-18 05:00 PM


Lady
I'll bet you make wonderful cookies and cakes.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-12-18 06:14 PM


love this one Sir Sy
RDB

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-12-18 07:14 PM


Roniece,
Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment.

jwesley
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12 posted 2006-12-19 08:20 PM


And a good king you make my friend...enjoyed this.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-12-19 09:02 PM


jwesley
Thank you my friend.

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2006-12-20 01:50 AM


King Sigh, this maiden wouldst be honoured to touch thy robe.

Lay thy regal head gently upon feathered pillows and dream sweetly.

Sleep tight this nite!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2006-12-20 08:19 AM


Earth Angel
You are a delight Angel or not.

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2006-12-20 09:45 AM


I be part angel and part nymph.

Have a glorious day, Sir Sonneteer!


EA

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2006-12-20 05:00 PM


Earth Angel
I suspected as much. LOL

Sunshine
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18 posted 2012-06-19 04:08 PM


Ah my friend...
I remember you well.

Sending up kisses, Sy.


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