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Phantoms of my Sighs
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Phantoms of my Sighs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Phantoms of My Sighs I sleep within a flow of sighs Feathered pillows and echo cries The night has sent a host of ghosts Phantoms that will roast the most They oft into my sleeping mind Some are soft and some unkind All will offer pantomime Each a field of separate time They’re echoes of my day of real With changes of my stays appeal It’s roman orgy or a fear But never ever very clear I wallow in a field of seem Or hide within a shadows dream But ever busy sounding sighs For some of them are outright lies These dreams are robes of nightly dress And I’m the king of acquiesce |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Sy, this was wonderful. As Alice Cooper said "Welcome to my nightmare." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I wallow in a field of seem Or hide within a shadows dream But ever busy sounding sighs For some of them are outright lies (sighs) extraordinary this...enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
twinkyfl1 Enjoyed the comment, thak you. LeeJ Thank you sweety and the top of the morning to yee.  |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
I really liked this Seymour... I couldn't tell you why exactly I just did. lol  "The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Triskaidekaphobia Love your honesty, thank you. |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Loved this Sy...you are truly a wordsmith and a painter of words. Bea  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beatrice, Painted in oils for many years. I just changed my medium and now use words. Thank you for the kind comment. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
dear king of acquiesce I am in love with this one... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I'll bet you make wonderful cookies and cakes.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
love this one Sir Sy  RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
And a good king you make my friend...enjoyed this. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley Thank you my friend. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
King Sigh, this maiden wouldst be honoured to touch thy robe. Lay thy regal head gently upon feathered pillows and dream sweetly.  Sleep tight this nite! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel You are a delight Angel or not. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I be part angel and part nymph.  Have a glorious day, Sir Sonneteer! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I suspected as much. LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah my friend... I remember you well. Sending up kisses, Sy. |
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