Open Poetry #39 |
hymns of hemlock |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
it was always the mostly crazy with just a bit of elegant occasional that made my hands want to mess up your hair and hear you call me bad word names as you ran from my eyes part time and chased me with pretend intentions too when you thought I was out of breath from just imagining what I wished you wanted and then you wore the hard to get stuff with so many buttons sewn on purpose down the sides and front of your dreams slipping off of your precautions so easy when you shrugged your shoulders with maybe but catching on my moments that exposed you when you were at the top of my stares nonchalantly adjusting your hem high sights with just the passing drafts of my glances ___________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-18-2006 08:46 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love watching you play |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
it was always the mostly crazy with just a bit of elegant occasional that made my hands want to mess up your hair and hear you call me bad word names as you ran from my eyes part time and chased me with pretend intentions too when you thought I was out of breath from just imagining what I wished you wanted oooh Mr Dark, you can mess up my hair anytime and I wouldn't run from your eyes! enjoyed this very much RDB x |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie, thanks for watching, I do enjoy your eyes _____________ ms b, you are such a tease..and teas are some of my favorite sipping pleasures, thank you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
profound, utterly warm hearted with extraordinary endowments which brushes few lives, yet, the most intimate connection of which we rise to the mind as playfulness in memory... Well done D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thanks lady friend for being close often |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Nicely done Dark. Im going to make sure my girlfriend never reads your poetry for surely your words will subdue her. [Profanity deleted] here she com [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-18-2006 01:43 PM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
friend true' thanks for the read her read em guy...just make sure you are close in case..(grin) thanks again |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' who could ever call you bad word names? nice... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
bad word names bigdaddy? oh...you mean like Teddybear or softie or.... (grinzz) Much enjoyed this D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, whatever the name..just call me often, thanks babe. ___________ ms gs...no not softie...thanks for the gentle eyes ms |
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