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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-18 07:19 AM


it was always the mostly crazy
with just a bit of elegant occasional
that made my hands want to mess up your hair
and hear you call me bad word names

as you ran from my eyes part time
and chased me with pretend intentions too
when you thought I was out of breath
from just imagining what I wished you wanted

and then you wore the hard to get stuff
with so many buttons sewn on purpose
down the sides and front of your dreams
slipping off of your precautions so easy

when you shrugged your shoulders with maybe
but catching on my moments that exposed you
when you were at the top of my stares
nonchalantly adjusting your hem high sights

with just the passing drafts of my glances


___________
daark

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-18-2006 08:46 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-12-18 07:31 AM


love watching you play
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-18 07:31 AM


it was always the mostly crazy
with just a bit of elegant occasional
that made my hands want to mess up your hair
and hear you call me bad word names

as you ran from my eyes part time
and chased me with pretend intentions too
when you thought I was out of breath
from just imagining what I wished you wanted


oooh Mr Dark, you can mess up my hair anytime and I wouldn't run from your eyes!  enjoyed this very much   RDB x

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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3 posted 2006-12-18 08:47 AM


ms dixie, thanks for watching, I do enjoy your eyes

_____________

ms b, you are such a tease..and teas are some of my favorite sipping pleasures, thank you

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-12-18 09:47 AM


profound, utterly warm hearted with extraordinary endowments which brushes few lives, yet, the most intimate connection of which we rise to the mind as playfulness in memory...

Well done D.

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2006-12-18 12:40 PM


ms leej, thanks lady friend for being close often
trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2006-12-18 01:21 PM


Nicely done Dark. Im going to make sure my girlfriend never reads your poetry for surely your words will subdue her. [Profanity deleted] here she com

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-18-2006 01:43 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
7 posted 2006-12-18 04:21 PM


friend true' thanks for the read her read em guy...just make sure you are close in case..(grin) thanks again
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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8 posted 2006-12-18 04:58 PM




Stranger darlin'

who could ever call you
bad word names?

nice...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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9 posted 2006-12-18 09:01 PM


bad word names bigdaddy?  oh...you mean like Teddybear or softie or.... (grinzz)


Much enjoyed this D.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
10 posted 2006-12-18 09:51 PM


ladyone, whatever the name..just call me often, thanks babe.


___________

ms gs...no not softie...thanks for the gentle eyes ms

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