Open Poetry #39 |
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I Just Cant Fit (Repost) |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA ![]() |
My despair is never ending, Only silence do I hear, friends to me are lost, Amid my silence and my tears. For the sunrise is always hidden, The sunset... never seen, And hope is far removed, From the joy which could have been. Now hope is quickly falling, Into a never ending pit, And though I try to carry on, To life... I just can’t fit. For I locked away your beauty, Then I threw away the key, I tried so hard to forget you, But you haunt and stir... in me. Will there ever be a sunrise, Will there be a brand new morn, Will I ever see the beauty, In the sun at break of dawn? No! I don’t want to see such beauty, For despair has stole my heart, deep down I truly know, That we’ll always be apart. When your heart no more recalls me, When at last I face my death, Know... that when I left thee, Your name was upon my breath. For I whispered your name too often, And clung to thoughts of you, When I should have bid farewell, When I should have said, ”Adieu”. You were everything to me, My today and my tomorrows, Now all I’ve known is gone, Replaced by sadness and with sorrows. Though others... I may love, For they’ll cast their magic spell, No one will feel the depth of love, That I felt for you... Danielle. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Bill.... this is an excellent write! Danielle is loved by you very much I see... ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
to love once...it's all we can ask ![]() |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
In this poem, you have expressed every women's dream. To be loved as no other. I love the subjects you address in your poetry, and look forward to reading more of your work. |
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