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Fingers Crescent
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Fingers Crescent |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fingers Crescent More than I could fit Upon a page, the lamp is lit Befitting of Aladdin’s repertoire Aglow, the highlights dance Upon the hint of sweet romance As starlight on my shoulders Across from me, you read A comprehensive word to deed Still warm upon your face The rush of colors chase away denial Hypnotic rise, yet lingering exile Ceasing altogether, trill and tender I rise, to blow the candle from your eyes again That moon imparts a smile on pure white skin In shiver, driven snow then peeks attention Making love our own invention Just to melt content with fingers crescent Copyright Kkh 12/18/06 |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kathleen... simply lovely! RDB |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Lovely!! Serene and soft... yet sensual. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Across from me, you read A comprehensive word to deed Still warm upon your face The rush of colors chase away denial Hypnotic rise, yet lingering exile Ceasing altogether, trill and tender beautifully composed, a true song of love and tenderness...enjoyed this |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I really liked this poem. Was very elegant. (: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I rise, to blow the candle from your eyes again" it's another jewel! |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
just wonderfull..i really loved this one.. Good Work, As Always! Denis. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A beauty!! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In the snow? Wait just a second.... I think an electric blanket...(waterproofed and shockproofed.....might help some.... |
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