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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-09-13 05:45 PM



It's late tonight and I'm passing on words,
releasing the fragility of my being,
surprising myself with artificial dreams
filling the loveless moments,
rescuing the need that waits
for a perfection that no longer exists.

The heart is tender, bruised more easily
since the hurting words have ceased,
but left their trail of doubts to linger
in the darkness of each night.

Thinking of you in each morning stretch,
living and learning to unleash the foundation
for a new beginning, where letting go
brings a stirring to my heart,
flowers to my door and a meeting of
the unwritten.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
1 posted 2006-09-13 05:48 PM


unwritten isnt so bad, that just means you get to make up the next chapter and make it the way you want it to be

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-09-13 07:56 PM


Deep from your heart, a lovely, candid write.  *hugs*....jo
Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
3 posted 2006-09-13 11:05 PM


Ah Little Mo darling one, you always have a way of writing that speaks so softly and achingly that I almost can see the weeping wounds. Love this delicate write, it is so very YOU
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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