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Open Poetry #39

The Melody Of Love

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2006-12-16 11:28 AM

When two hearts beat together,
the melody sounds so sweet.
No greater tune can ever be heard,
than when two loving hearts meet.

Every note, strung together,
comes from both heart's devotion.
Creating a musical masterpiece,
filled with so much deep emotion.

A love tune without an ending,
as new notes are continually played.
A beautiful melody from hearts in love,
which together, have tenderly made

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-16 11:50 AM

precious!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-12-16 12:27 PM

Excellent!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2006-12-16 06:01 PM

Nice writing...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2006-12-17 12:17 PM

A love tune without an ending,
as new notes are continually played.
A beautiful melody from hearts in love,
which together, have tenderly made

nice writing here Bill

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