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Open Poetry #39

No Dreams To See

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
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0 posted 2006-12-15 01:29 AM

Her love for me is long forgot,
No joy could e’er persuade,
My heart to soar...
As it had before,
Nor my words again essayed.

For silent falls my lip,
And candid ne’er my heart,
My mind in cloud...
With love, it's shroud,
And forever shall we part.

And blinded were my eyes,
To the pain that would descend,
My insensate soul...
Could ne’er extol,
Your virtues ‘til the end.

Then banished were your arms,
That with tenderness had held,
Our forms to each...
But out of reach,
And lost - the love that dwelled.

Will regrets replace our memories,
Can love recall its youth?
Of the days we spent...
With loves consent,
In moments blessed by truth.

No! The love that was, is over,
And wasted was our chance,
No dreams to see...
No you – no me,
Just the final, farewell dance.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-15 07:59 AM

excellent write!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-12-15 01:03 PM

Well done.

Constance
Member

since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

3 posted 2006-12-15 02:28 PM

Had to check you out, (no Raider fan can be bad), and I'm glad I did. Well done you!

smiles,
Constance

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-12-15 02:48 PM

Nicely done. Enjoyed.
Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2006-12-15 06:30 PM

Im glad that you all liked the poem.Thank you for taking the time to read, and leave a comment here

Constance *lol* yes the Raiders Fans have bad reputation thanks for coming bye (:

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2006-12-17 02:26 AM

oooh I nearly missed this one! wonderful my sweet Bill! RDB

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