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Merry Christmas |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=48906808 I felt those remarkable good memories well up as thoughts go envisioning refreshed by early cock-crow breeze suspending high atop mid-morning’s timeless miasma it was an infusive azure sky eagerly alluring my mind’s eye to pull this mouthwatering river in towards the fragrance of soul like wild horses of blandish cajole in the shadows of this small valley, the wee canoe of my being, live the offspring of morning’s full of life yawns I realize great heart of garden entrance still pounding slow-moving currents of startling blue eyes…where over hanging chestnut trees dance with children long side defining chorale of some launched tenderness in my mere life …then…. To my surprise a great white owl skims low or’ this river & soared up into the arms of some husky voiced air…. watching, I pressed great joy, hard to my breast, holding onto this greenhouse, trembling with desire and fear…yet, knowing somehow a far more decent reward, opened the door for me to undress into this time, this space…. defining the tongue of love deep in my mouth, breathtaking the calm afterglow, radiating from a effortless smile of my disciplined lover moving closer, yet closer still his hair sleeked back, face glistening with an easy smile of melody warmth and coziness humming “silent night” where darkness slips through fingers like grains of sand on an endless beach white birds back swooping like solitary sentinels, kissing me softly behind the ear whispering gently, come with us dear… watching from the verandah of decision & dreams, streaming out before me a riverbed of forever… jingling of buckles on khaki pockets slowing pulsing a knowing without knowing silver tinsel trailing over a million fold flutes, & a grand piano began their interpretation of the greatness in the spirit of Christmas to the tune of white excited snow flakes soothingly knocking on the stained glass door of some joyously pitched voice, dripping pallid carpets of cotton notes, tickling the flesh of my fingertips while skating across earth’s floor widening every imaginable reaction like a whirlwind visit of primary colors with great sound, ornate multitudes of golden good natured paths splattering across my mind, like a warm pullover sweater, worn with significance for the very first time…. Mini-molecules that wash the soul Oh for the love of these Zen pirates Heroic enough to travel through over night philosophical mind speak near by…in some cloud of smiles while nodding…some great fantasy I heard what I was capable of the aftershock of a warrior’s heart who believes each turn in the road hids new adventure leaving me gifted with little great things amazing this nature’s smile of life simply amazing “does anything else really matter”? I ponder while I nestle closer, yet closer still to this remarkable lover |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I fell into your words like the balls of a play pen that the children play in and was covered up.  Good morning sweety. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Deep breathing here  |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Love it! Very Nice especially the ending passage! Rich |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hummmmm.... Nice. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"amazing this nature’s smile of life simply amazing “does anything else really matter”? I ponder while I nestle closer, yet closer still to this remarkable lover" Yes, I listened to Julian as I read this... you amaze me lady...absolutely stunning!!! Sing in me muse... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
whew... awesome LeeJ |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
LeeJ., Ah, a breather, when I can relax for a few and enjoy! A pleasure it in its entirity, but these verses blew me away when I read them twice aloud. They have such a beautiful flow to them. misc a Merry Christmas to you! "I realize great heart of garden entrance still pounding slow-moving currents of startling blue eyes…where over hanging chestnut trees dance with children long side" defining chorale of some launched tenderness in my mere life" and "warmth and coziness humming “silent night” where darkness slips through fingers like grains of sand on an endless beach white birds back swooping like solitary sentinels, kissing me softly behind the ear whispering gently, come with us dear…" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Merry Christmas...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Lee. Merry Christmas to you and yours. hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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