Open Poetry #39 |
Peacock Feathers |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Peacock Feathers My Peacock feathers catch the sun When all is said and all is done The iridescent of its glare Still holds this hen with silver hair It’s rare that I still preen about For now I really have no doubt She’s been with me through thick and thin My backward glance is naught but grin Except for those that sooth my pride Of the overtures of my bride Those moments of our side by side Those rumps with nothing left to hide But time to time I spread them out To show her what I’m still about To show her that I’m still aware That she’s the fairest of the fair So look my dear my Peacock spread For you twill spread until I’m dead |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this dear poet, gave me happy tears.... lovely sigh simply lovely |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
I have loved reading you since I came to PiP, Sy .. and I finally figured out why. You give me hope that love really can last forever *hugs* ~Sheli~ By words the mind is winged |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy~ And how lovely this is! She's one lucky lady... but then, you're a very handsome peacock! & , Nancy Sing in me muse... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you my sweet. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I always knew you were a colorful feller, Sy Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....I love Peacocks and I'm pleasured to have a few in my neighborhood, but they don't write poetry like you. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very Nice sir! Very nice Indeed! And yea she is lucky Rich |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Stands in comment line *geesh* finally made it. Nicely done here Sir. Include me in to being a avid reader of yours. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Thank you, thank you. Martie They write poetry in feathers. Rich Thank you so much. trutodaraiders You made me a merry Christmas passing Thank you sweet. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you love. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Yes! For her, your still the cock of the walk. And always will be. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh well this really stole my heart you outrageously glorious peacock and she IS a lucky peacock lady |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Loved your reply. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy, another masterpiece from you - just lovley!! RDB x |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, Very kind of you to say. |
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