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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were from the same side of the street just different directions and times stuck at the passing light with our reds and greens confused we both watched the trees and the eyes often went behind them with others just so no one would get a virgin the first time they left us behind and then there was accidental and his suitcase of tricks and treats and a bus station's contemplation where we sat too long not to notice that there was empty in the other's eyes and we each had something broken to offer to the other's broken fix something that would fit by forcing with just enough gentle to hurt it open ______________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A compassionate write, Poet... and very well done. The peeling off of the layers of understanding go far into the grain of humanity.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for sitting here and smiling |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Dark...Many times we fix ourselves by fixing someone else. I always love the sensitive side of you poems. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you little neighbor, sometimes being broken is a blessing |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Very nice dark. Read a lot of your poems. Always enjoy your writings. Very talented; sure you know. Being broke can be humbling experience. Thank you for sharing this poem |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thank you truto'..I appreciate your comments. Being broken can also be a humbling experience..but sometimes it is a good thing. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I have enjoyed reading all your writes Mr Dark and this is no exception... I hope your brokeness will soon be mended RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, thanks lady!! actually this was suggesting the idea of when two people meet they often bring something broken that fixes what the other one has need of being fixed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"that there was empty in the other's eyes and we each had something broken to offer to the other's broken fix something that would fit by forcing with just enough gentle to hurt it open" ~sighing~ the truth of this  M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah now I get it!  thank you for deciphering again for me x RDB x |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
things get fixed but I wonder about accidents always a pleasure. Love, reg |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' being broken and just enough gentle sigh... nice |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMS, thank you for the read and thoughts _________________________ ms b, (grin) ___________________________ mswood, sure I believe in accidental and santa and the tooth fairy in her thigh highs and..oh sorry..thanks babe ______________ ladyone, thank you for leanin on your elbows and watching the water on the windows here |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Truth in poetry is beautiful to find. I can truly relate to this one, because I know I'm never filled unless I'm filling someone else, never completely happy unless I'm giving help...and never unbroken unless I'm binding up someone else's hurt. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Thanks my friend, well spoken and right on target. |
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