Open Poetry #39 |
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Broadway Opening Night |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
The lights are slowly dimming The curtain's going up The stagehands take take their places The scenery's all set up The orchestra is waiting For the conductor to cue them in The audience waits expectantly For the overture to begin The singers wait backstage Sipping tea to warm their throats Softly singing scales Praying they'll hit their notes! The actors mouth their lines Hoping they won't forget The Director paces back and forth Nervous and upset! After all the hassles Of auditioning for the part Months of rehearsals And giving their all for art They wait with baited breath Whispering "This is it!" Wishing each other luck Hoping they have a hit This isn't just a job to them They love the work they do And when they walk out on that stage The audience loves them too! Let's hear it for the show people Who live to entertain you After all the heartbreak and rejection Their reward is applause from you! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Grandma Bea... you did a wonderful job of this - everyone loves the show people! ![]() btw: there is an double 'that' in the first verse |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
nope make that 'take' ![]() |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Romiece...don't know how that slipped by me...I did check for typos. (Must have been a senior moment.) Hell...I have senior MONTHS! Grandma Bea |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beatrice, A delightful read, I enjoyed. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
This was entertaining but in the last line of the first stanza I think the meter and syllable count and rythmn could use a bit of tweaking also in second stanza near end. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Listen to the applause!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! Sing in me muse... |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Shadows...happy you enjoyed it. Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Thanks Sy...Having trained for and participated in the theatre and music world, I know first hand that magical feeling. There is no other in the world like it! Bea Grandma Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Rhia...as a musician, I write it as I speak it...it's all in the interpretation I guess. Thanks for pointing it out. Bea Grandma Bea |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Enchantress...thanks for all the applause...that's what keeps them going! Bea Grandma Bea |
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