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FNG
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0 posted 2006-12-13 02:18 AM


Life's a ride on an elevator.
We started out on ground.
Moving to different levels above.

There's some who gladly zoom
to the highest height,
For a view that exhilarate.

Some prefer to stop soon,
for fear of perils
at astounding heights.

There're people who come
in our box at different stage.
Some came in without bringing warmth.
Some brougth relief for the lonely ride,
with much chatter and stories cided.

Bells ring at different times,
a reminder of chance.
Some missed it,
to stop at opportunities.

Sometimes caught stuck in the track,
can't move up or down or anywhere.
Some get hysterical with this winding stall.
Some take it as a resting call.

Hope you had a happy ride....

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1 posted 2006-12-13 07:54 AM


good one
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2 posted 2006-12-13 07:45 PM


FNG~



I'll take a ride to the top ...
visiting each floor along the way~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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FNG
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3 posted 2006-12-14 01:05 AM




Dear Passing shadows and Marge

Thanks for reading

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