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Open Poetry #39

Ghosts From Within

stevepoet
Junior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 46

0 posted 2006-12-12 11:39 PM

Lately Ive been feeling the ghosts from within
eating at my insides,terrorizing my skin
like cerebus guarding the gates of hell
they posses multiple heads and a hideous smell
heads without caring, heads without emotion
heads that dont know the power of the ocean
the power of devotion,positive and true
I must escape these terrible auras making me blue
looking to the stars I find the power to resist
the power to stop this negative energy,clinging to me like a cyst

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-13 03:28 AM

Steve, I enjoyed this - the flow, the rhythm and verse all worked very nicely

RDB

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