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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-12-12 03:10 PM


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Goodbye sun
It’s time for us to go

Once more we hear
A trumpet’s call
A beat of drums
In the thinning air

Wearily we’ll advance
Upon that hill
One last time
As we did before

Remember us
As we try  
To recall that thing
When we were young

Call it courage
Or what you will


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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2006-12-13 07:18 PM


Enjoyed...only a few days ago they had a gathering of some of the final Pearl Harbor survivers...generations pass...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-14 03:14 AM


Thank you - I enjoyed the read here..  RDB
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-12-14 07:35 AM


touching piece
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2006-12-14 08:25 AM


heartwarmingly sad
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-04-24 04:11 PM


only real man writes like this. very manly.


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