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The Eye of I
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The Eye of I |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: The Eye of I I cannot soothe my sanity Nor smooth my tides humanity But hold to a pendulous swing And the angst that it will bring I cannot stop the spill of time Nor the process of dust and grime But sail upon an ageless sea And watch reflections aging me I fly within my minds abyss With wings awareness of amiss And only vagueness shows my goal And only mist surrounds my soul The path I walk is eye to I O’er valley’s green and sails of sigh And only time does hold my hand And offer me a wedding band So why remains the mast for now A I remain the path of how |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My eye and I love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Reads good to me. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
at the eye of you is peace Sir Sy and I enjoyed it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you for the sweet reply.  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... ( I love your name by the way!)  I enjoyed eyeing this piece of yours RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, Thank you and thank you For taking the trip to read this script. |
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