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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-12 07:17 AM



we were long legged strangers there
outside of nowhere special
with small talk running around us
like blind dogs in the heat
looking for fire plugs to water

your perfume was in casual conflict
with the dark one from habana
but you said he was sexy in black
and the way he just seemed to fit
into the evening edged sky

made you think of other things too
and how they might fit together
but you smiled then, changing the subject
lest it be too obvious how
you had read my mind hours ago

when you were a different woman
forgetting about the things you enjoy
just long enough to miss them more
and wish you had one or two around
to help page you through the hours

for a night time of life times
_______________

daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-12-12 07:25 AM



Now, this is liking me
gently...




Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-12-12 07:29 AM


ms sun, am pleased that it pleased you, thanks
passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-12-12 07:43 AM


"when you were a different woman
forgetting about the things you enjoy
just long enough to miss them more"

there you go looking at me again

or so it seems

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-12-12 09:11 AM


ms dixie, it does seem so yes, thanks lady
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-12-12 11:44 AM


now babe, you just know how I think black is sooo sexy....      Enjoyed this'n bigD~
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-12-12 12:41 PM


ms gs, thannnnks babe
Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2006-12-12 01:09 PM


"for a nighttime of lifetimes"

don't happen very often

kind of like being wooed forever...

I really enjoyed this one...



~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-12-12 04:54 PM




Stranger darlin’
there is no intersection
of no and maybe in this town  
it's all go

and I do love one or two around
to help me page those warm nights

nice one

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-12-12 04:59 PM


ms jul, am pleased that you enjoyed it...and yes you are right with the timeline

______________

ladyone, thanks for stopping by and paging through this, you bless me ladyone

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-12-12 05:17 PM


oooh lovely!  talk more like that Mr Dark and I will be hopping a plane to come track you down!     RDB
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-12-12 05:23 PM


ms b..ok will do so..land at Santa Barbara will look for you there..(grin)
rwood
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12 posted 2006-12-12 09:46 PM


Thank you

for helping me "page through the hours".

always inspiring and dark mind enlightening.

Night lovins D.

Reg


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2006-12-13 05:18 AM


sorry Mr Dark just me again ... had to come back for another read of this gorgeous work of yours.. I like, I like, I like!!   RDB
Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-12-13 07:18 AM


ms wood, you make me go places where the trees are dark thoughts, thank you babe

______________

ms ronnie b, thank you for coming back
please continue

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