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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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Memories long and pleasant spent Of touch and thoughts of you, Of kisses deep and heaven sent, And in your arms I grew. Of loving life with dreams replete, Our souls combined, yet still, How sudden ended and complete, The anger - love did kill. Sorrow quickly took its course, Now life, its beauty spent, And all I own is deep remorse, For the dreams we never dreamt. At times I drift on golden strands, And dream of you once more, Praying - clasping desperate hands, Wait! I hear a knocking at the door... Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Why has no one commented on this? This belongs on top! well done!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders A good write, enjoyed the read. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thank you both for your comments. Interloper i dunno maybe because I am new here.? That was really nice of you 2 say |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
At times I drift on golden strands, And dream of you once more, Praying - clasping desperate hands, Wait! I hear a knocking at the door... lovely Bill... answer the door please! RDB |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thank You So much for your comments, especially you RDB. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wonderful Bill those last two lines... yes! |
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