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Open Poetry #39
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stevepoet
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0 posted 2006-12-11 09:29 PM


The darkness produces an ominous light in the brain
sparking fuses of writing
seeing in the dark is just getting more familiar with it
that is what we must do as a people to communicate
get closer and closer till were all brothers
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1 posted 2006-12-11 10:59 PM

yep! I do agree!
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2006-12-12 09:31 AM

I agree with your statement
I just do not see the poetry in it.
Sorry...
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