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mood light special |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were always out of step there at the line to go faster together you and your cat and your mittens and me with the guns and hounds and single seater walking shoes sometimes the mornings healed us limo stop temporary, changing drivers midroute off and on occasional but giving us time for the sun and window down suggestions as you would read poems from lovers out loud to the tattoos on my back and I would show you mirror skins that made you feel uncomfortable until the curves came too fast and you fell on top of me on purpose just to make my arms close so you could say I made you stay in case anyone caught you in love so many miles from proper town and the mood lights of your neighborhood _____________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
and you fell on top of me on purpose just to make my arms close so you could say I made you stay in case anyone caught you in love so many miles from proper town Oh Mr Dark... you write such beautiful words! very much enjoyed the journey here! RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, thank you for driving by ms |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Fascinating view through those mood lights Hope |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms hope, thanks for the review lady friend. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and you fell on top of me on purpose just to make my arms close so you could say I made you stay in case anyone caught you in love so many miles from proper town and the mood lights of your neighborhood" Left me with a good feeling. Nice way to start the day.  Hugsss E. Sing in me muse... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyE, and you left me too with a good feeling, thanks ms |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can't just copy one line... no more than you can eat one chip.   |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks ladywarm for the touch |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...to touch the soft light around a loving touch is not always easy...here's mine. |
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superbee New Member
since 2006-11-28
Posts 7USA |
 now that is a cruise in a limo...the only one I ever took was to go grocery shopping!!! enjoyed this abunch!!!Superbee |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
oops I was replyinng as my roomamte again!! sorry!! Read Superbee!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul thank you for the cruise by..twice |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' you know what happens if you get caught in love that far from proper town and I've been cruisin' a little close lately but that limo ride is so nice love this |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, am pleased that you came along, please enjoy the ride often if you please thanks ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah BigDaddy, your soft side is showing. Enjoyed this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, shhhhh (grin) thanks for touching softly |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I like the way you let a 'mood light special' shine a everlovin' light on you. 'as you would read poems from lovers out loud to the tattoos on my back and I would show you mirror skins that made you feel uncomfortable until the curves came too fast' They always do that. Mighty fine write, D. Lovins, me |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms wood, you make my oozie shoes shine with your lovie place reply, thanks babe |
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