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Open Poetry #39

I need

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2006-12-08 01:32 PM

there's a war
indside my soul
can't explain it
but it won't
let me go
I need to sail
above the wind
I need ot soar
above the din
I need fly
to be free
I need to know
that you are
just as
in love with me,,,,

kingsangel

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-12-08 01:35 PM

Feeling your pain here Julie, and knowing the feel of this. Hugs.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-12-14 05:32 AM

there's a war
indside my soul
can't explain it
but it won't
let me go

yes, I hear you on this one... nice write
RDB

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-12-14 07:39 AM

been on both sides of this one....

well written!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-12-14 08:25 AM

Julie
yes, very well written

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-12-14 09:46 AM

Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

6 posted 2006-12-14 10:15 AM

For everytime I've felt this way. This little thing you've written says alot for me. Thanks Very Very Nice

Rich

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

7 posted 2006-12-14 12:04 PM

I know the feeling to well. It is unfortunate that their is not a scale, love scale that can measure one's love to another. Nicely done here.

I need fly
to be free
I need to know
that you are
just as
in love with me,,,,

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

8 posted 2006-12-16 09:55 PM

I love how I start reading one of your poems, and then at the end I'm like awwwww. The ending was really cute.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

9 posted 2006-12-16 11:54 PM

well done Julie...

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