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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
It is captain I’ve been assigned, Meaning your lives are mine, Don’t whine, Sweep the deck and make it shine, Responsibility, I decline. Is that nine shivers that ride up your spine? No, it’s nine bullets that intertwine Tearing holes into your physical design. Deaths from battles are what statistics combine, The only thing that runs though my mind is dollar signs. The day I resign, I'll be the only to refine. So hurry, grab your ammunition and form my line. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
oh this has got to be one of my favorites by you. it was hmmmmm well good and it had words that made me smile cuz it so true  hope to read more soon... hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked your flow. good write. -Juju -Juju |
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