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The Motion Of The Ocean
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The Motion Of The Ocean |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
What will they say about you when your gone? Will they write it down and sing you in a song? Are you just going through the motions? Could you learn a lesson from the oceans? Do you rise and fall with the tide? Do you stuggle with the emotions you cant describe? You thought you grew wiser with time You thought you would finally find A reason for the seasons What happened to promise and hope? You feel like an endless beach in a grain of sand The tide has come to lend its hand If youre not in reason Youre in season Blowing like the wind and flowing like the seas Do you watch the seasons change from the trees? Could you learn a lesson from the ocean? Could you part the sea through devotion? Is time just time? Is there separation between body and mind? Why do we want democracy to last? Everything comes to finally pass Nothing ever stays the same But nothing ever comes to change Are you in season? Or are you just going through the motions? Do you rise and fall with the oceans? Are you in reason? Have you come to find this life as treason? To freedom? To season? Its summer and your cold of heart Who decides when the seasons start? Religion and tradition decide your belief Ultimately leading to your inherent grief Could you learn a lesson from the wind? Could you gently move and mend? Pick it up and never end Take a lesson from the wind True love never ends |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I flow with the motion of the ocean. I blow with the winds thru' the trees. There's a reason for every season. From spring buds to the falling leaves.  Live each moment to the fullest for it is as it should be at that moment in time. "Take a lesson from the wind True love never ends" ~ A lovely thought!   EA |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"Take a lesson from the wind True love never ends" I loved these lines of the poem. Wonderful write! ~Alli~ |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Great flow to this, Nikerlz. The short stanzas are really effective and I agree with the sentiments expressed fully! Cheers Bill |
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