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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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No words can ever take away the sadness that you feel and you probably think right now “how will I ever heal?” Although the darkness overwhelms it seems that death has won, your faith and time can soothe the heart, give courage to go on. The tests and trials that you now face while burdened with your grief will turn to smiles when you recall - his life beyond belief. So many years you smiled with him, you held him in your heart and in his eyes you saw his love right from the very start. He couldn’t walk and couldn’t talk but how he laughed with glee and in so many, many ways he showed you victory. So cry a while and let grief reign until your mourning’s done but remember after all – he now shines with the sun. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
So cry a while and let grief reign until your mourning’s done but remember after all – he now shines with the sun. oh my... what a beautiful write... sometimes words can start the healing process - these words are very beautiful indeed... RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write and good to see you finally |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A very moving write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one brings sadness home. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Beautifully encouraging words of hope Keth. Very nicely done. Take care and HAve fun. Steve |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Very Nice. Cheers - Ed |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
way to go Keth....well done |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Very touching! This poem almost made me cry. ~Bill Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Kethry, This is stated so well, having just lost my Mom, it almost felt for me. Thanks, and I am sorry if you lost someone special. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I wrote this for the parents of one my clients. He died at twenty five. He had Cerebral Palsy. Some would say he never lived but I think he lived more than most. He was always laughing and smiling and his whole face lit up when he was arguing with his dad about television programs. Thank you all for your responses. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ This touches~ What a kind and loving lady you are~ I miss you girlie girl~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you for this beautiful poem Kethry and for your wonderful heart... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just me again... I had to come back and read these beautiful words again... they are very healing... RDB |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I read this soon after you posted it... and have come back to it often... You may have written it for one situation, but your wise words touch my heart... and help lessen the flow of my own tears. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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