sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
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2006-12-06
01:05 AM
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Waiting For Santa My brother told me you’re not real and sissy said that too But Santa I know they are wrong and I will wait for you I hung my stocking on the hearth; it’s waiting for you there And since they are so little I thought I’d hang up a pair Mommy is making cookies so you’ll have a snack to eat Daddy said make chocolate chip, the kind that’s semi-sweet I don’t know how my Daddy knows what cookies you like best I think he hopes when you are done that he’ll get all the rest Our chimney looks so tiny that I hope you don’t get stuck To get all of my presents down you’ll need a lot of luck Mommy told me not worry that you will find a way Then she smiled at Daddy to see just what he would say My Daddy told me sometimes you put toys together here Just like the new bicycle that you brought for me last year You must have had a hard time ‘cause I thought I heard you yell It sounded like you hurt your hand but the bike was really swell Did Daddy help you build it? ‘Cause it sounded like his shout Next day he had a Band-Aid on, so what’s that all about ? When I asked him what happened, it was really a surprise ‘Cause I thought I saw your twinkle Santa, in my Daddy’s eyes I just don’t understand this year why Daddy looked so tired When he heard all the things I want said “assembly required” But anyway I know you’ll come, ‘cause Mom and Daddy said That I have been a real good boy and now I’m off to bed
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2006
Stephen E. Washam
- All Rights Reserved
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
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2006-12-06
03:17 AM
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oh yes I believe in Santa too! a very very nice write Stephen ... can't wait to open my santa presents this year! RDB
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
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2006-12-06
05:32 AM
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what a beautiful Christmas write.I remember when my son was six he got a trampoline and said "See Santa must be real because mum and dad couldn't hide that in the wardrobe."
a good commitee can decimate communication.
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Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
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2006-12-06
08:18 AM
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enjoyed the write....
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2006-12-06
09:03 AM
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You brought out the inner child in me.. The one that still believes. A most excellent piece for my collection of poetry by you Stephen.
Sing in me muse... and through me tell the story~
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Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2006-12-06
09:05 AM
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I'll be visiting my grandchildren this weekend; this sounds like JUST the poem to read to them! Thank you, Steve!
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-12-06
09:30 AM
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how precious!
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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
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2006-12-06
10:05 AM
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For those of us who keep the magical Spirit of Christmas alive through the personification of Santa Clause... Thank You for a most excellent poem to add to a festive collection shared at this time of year.
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garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
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2006-12-07
11:07 AM
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Awwwww, this is so adorable!! Hugs, Ethel
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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
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2006-12-07
05:04 PM
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That's precious. I know a man might not like to be told that, but it just is. It's light and amusing too. Very well done.
Nan (Pilgrim variety)
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Jess
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since 2006-06-06
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Washington
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2006-12-07
10:57 PM
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That was so cute and funny. Reminded me of the song "I saw mommy kissing santa clause"
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sewasham
Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
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2006-12-08
12:07 PM
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Thanks to all for the warm comments. I hope all have a blessed holiday season. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
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2006-12-09
12:36 PM
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May the joy of Christmas bless you, too, Steve!
This is a wonderful poem full of Christmas spirit--and the innocence of a child. I just adore it!
~Klassy
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