»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #39
»
Sans.
| Open Poetry #39 |
|
Sans. |
|
|
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
|
feeling my heart beat is sheer torment. The instrument of my death, bringing the companion love, to force me to my kness, knealing in pools of tears before my maker. Trying in vain to explain the vagaries of my state, but failing; so i submit now and forever to his eternal laws and punnishments, abidingly and wholeheartedly! At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
||
| © Copyright 2006 P.D - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
Darling Phil xxx My Heart is always resting with your xxxx love Bernadette xxxx |
||
|
lightkeeper Member
since 2006-09-13
Posts 100pluto |
You are the light of my life you are my sunshine and my rain. you are absorbed oh special essence, be it pleasure or be it pain xxx. Eternally Yours.... love Bernadette [This message has been edited by lightkeeper (12-05-2006 11:07 AM).] |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May Bernadette keep your light lit!  Your Maker could surely not "punish" a man who is a vessel of love and who appreciates the gifts of the Creator. A well-written, impassioned write! Love, Light, & Inner Peace, Linda  |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
echoing Linda's comment...couldn't have said it any better Nice read |
||
|
The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a strong, touching work |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
a very nice write ! RDB |
||
|
MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
I enjoyed the read. |
||
|
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The more humble we are, the closer we are to God, we all fail, that is why we need him, if we were perfect, there would be no reason for his perfect soul to die for us. Humbleness and confession is good for the heart and the soul! distinguishes between the true christian, and the hypocrite.....the hypocrite will always be prideful, boastful, never humble nor admitting wrong, sin. A true Christian (child of God) feels conviction from the holy spirit, to repent and change, to do better, to go and sin no more! That is how we know Gods loves us, because he sends the conviction of wrong, just as a parent scolds his child, so does our heavenly father who loves us , just like a potter and the clay, he has to take the lumps out to smoothe the clay, we are his cly in his hands and he is still working on us, molding, shaping us into his perfect image everyday, removing the lumps(sin). without conviction of wrong, some would question if they know God or not, for his word, the holy bible teaches us, the he is the good shepherd and the his sheep shall hear his voice. Through chastisement and conviction, therefore we know we are the sons of God, or the children of God..... Your poem just brought out alot of thoughts so I typed them as they came to me... Merry CHRISTmas! |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
echoing pain but so beautifully done. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
||
|
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely expressed, Phil... nice to read you again~~ M |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
