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street and skin duet
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street and skin duet |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the smooth strangling of glass bathed in a tear drop's saliva I can count the windows now and see where you stood shopping bending my mind into marble cartons I enjoy the quiet perfume of concrete your whispers linger like candles with their flicker jackets unbuttoned laceing the wires from bedlam's bustier round my splintered wrist of memories you stoop to worship the eyes of a flower that glances hopeful at your fingertips and wind witches grind together then the whims and scars of streets and skin ___________________ daark scribblenote: fingers entwined concept, pretty woman and wicked street..together yet seperate circumstantial duet |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You make me forget who is to play the street and who is to play some skin. Smiling on you...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Skin playin, played on the streets ..........  and for some reason I just thought of how that could leave such nasty brush burns.... *smilinatu* Enjoyed you today, Daark. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
whitelady, thank you _______________ ms g, thanks for driving by ms |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
could feel your smiles of memory throughout...what a lovely poem....errr, duet...beautiful recollection |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, thank you for watching the diet of this.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "I enjoy the quiet perfume of concrete" Me too!!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thanks little neighbor |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
 I like this alot!!!! kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul you are so cute when you do flips thanks ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' there is a certain corner do you know the one I mean? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my another masterpiece from the master! loved your words here  RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, yes I know that corner, and the main dancer too...thanks hon _________________ ms b, thanks for the slow waltz in.. |
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