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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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baroque storage area for promising edifice releasing all add-ons for useless demands my favorite pass time looking into the brain of testament downloading animation artwork on a slow screen secret charisma arouses an intellect of reality loitering halls peppered with profuse gratis time an eating tool in the hands of great escapes the exchange transforms genuine dreams spilling pungent solutions some strange intimate dialogue licking my eardrums dripping reflections bubbling heavy weightless cabled fingers love crafts perform seepage into high terrace of human touch ohhhhh for the mystical sunset traveling deep into a moon world of depth an overpopulated wine fanatic spawning catfish summers with no regrets his eyes invert mountains a faint fluorescence of liquid leaks golden hues smiling all around us ohhh, look!!!! see how everything fits! “exact” I am invaded by euphoric seals indefinable lethal injections sparkling keys double their size he points to splinters clinging to my heart promoting promise they are gone gone with dark sirens of charred places now we float on creamy cerulean skies shades of blue defined richer deeper I feel a great window on the creek bank of time and am partial to his waters sitting closer closer closer then ever before he holds me tight then tighter until breath seeps into a place where seekers of truth expose soul his lips are pleasant peaceful we look deeply into a dance of tomorrow within each other’s eyes dizzy free falling deliciously into an anthology of a warm bed of life slipping into the almond pink of human skin oh…life, feels so musical so intense, so impulsively significant it is a passage an arrest of soul intoxicating, he is I am unwilling to let go of this bountiful rogue heart health~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej, sometimes you speak in tongues your spirit is a gypsy I think much enjoyment in this slice ms |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh Lee I love this. Those rogues!! Sometimes it is impossible to let go, isn't it!! Much enjoyed this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ So fast the images of your voice fall upon my ear until this: "ohhh, look!!!!" Thankyou!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I feel a great window on the creek bank of time and am partial to his waters" Can I just say....WOW!!! *hugs*....jo |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
I haven't a clue what you're talking about, LeeJ--but it sounds great! Cheers, Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lee, Enjoying the ride! love, jo Dublin Boy, May I whisper into your ear only? "thank you! I read all Lee writes and love her choice of words. Think I understand this one, maybe a part, maybe I have it wrong. But it never matters because it is the flow and choice of words that get me me". |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wonderful LeeJ... rogues the best part of life and they know it |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Yes i have always said your choice of words is staggering, but your work needs to be read and looked into deeper, your cerebral range is at a level most people dont know, like that of a dog that can hear a whistle, only some of us dare to go to your level Lee, and this speaks of euphoric passion and deep respecting beauty, thank you for it... Goldenrose. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You capture such wonderful visuals with your words Hope |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Lee, you have such a special way with words.. Wonderful write..much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"a faint fluorescence of liquid leaks golden hues smiling all around us" oh, Lee, what a gorgeous bit of magic this is! wish I had written this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Legere - to read Audire - to hear Discere - to learn Egere - to need Esse - to be You do have a special gift.  JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yeah wow about covers it, again wow i enjoyed the read Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly know how to look, see, feel, think and taste life and love ~ and I adore how you express them. Enjoyed the breathless free-fall!  So many, many lines that are quotable!!! Loving hug, Linda |
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