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Debo
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since 2006-04-18
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Texas U.S.A.

0 posted 2006-09-12 03:27 AM



We hiked down those old dusty roads.
Hid out in the woods,
Ran down to the little muddy
Water tank to catch some crawfish.
We would stick that crawfish on our hook
And later we’ve lot’s of perch.

We ran wild in those marshy back woods
Smoking cigarettes because
We thought it was cool.

We drove Dad’s truck
right into Barefoot lake
Right after his last
Payment had been made.

We swiped Mary’s car when I was only eight
Got caught joy riding in it the very next day
The whipping we had coming
I thought Dad could have killed us
Chased us up and down the street
With the limb from a tree
I never swiped anything again.

Yes we were wild and crazy kids
looking for adventure
And found trouble instead.

Debo

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2006-12-31 08:17 PM


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Yet here it is in a poem

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Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
2 posted 2007-01-23 12:06 PM


Thanks for the reply
Yet I didn't quite understand what you ment.

Debo

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2007-02-10 03:33 PM


I moved from the country to the city when I was small it is always something that I will miss that I never got a chance to fully appreciate and experience....so being the only people in the world I envy and that is country folk!!! I like this!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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