Open Poetry #39 |
And so .... |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
And so my thoughts of you are this I would like another moment with you soon You make me smile You make me laugh You make me feel like I’m loved awhile Life is short Opportunities are limited This I know But What you give me Is precious like a winter’s rose I will cherish it forever And When the time comes to say goodbye I will smile graciously and wish you well Hmmm....I'm rambling here I know!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b...he is waiting too, hurry before yesterday is gone. enjoyed this one |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Unfortunately, love does not come with a guarantee but it certainly can be worth the gamble of one's heart. This saying may be trite, but it is so often true, "It is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all!" Lovin' hug, EA |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
must be someone special... kingsangel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
“You make me laugh” ah Roniece laughter is so deadly wonderful can cause a woman to fall in love yep head over heels sigh… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
been there...still am there sometimes I think good write, I can relate! |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
I liked this.Nice flow to the whole poem. Steve |
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