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Open Poetry #39
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stevepoet
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since 2006-12-02
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0 posted 2006-12-02 06:40 PM




ressurected by the holy
I was neglected as the only,
blame was deflected then rejected
as I detected slowly
reflective I say was I too selective
I had my choice like an elective
but chose to be prepostorous
an element like phosphorous
I felt this deep in my esophagous
I was rushed to Emergency
with urgency,urgently
resurging me it gave me new light
I was born from the night
scorned for my plight
mourned for what might
but I kept the fight


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-02 09:14 PM


I like the flow and rhyming here - I'm not sure I understand what it's about though..

Be well
Roniece

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