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ozlem
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since 2006-10-06
Posts 16
0 posted 2006-12-02 03:27 PM


This pain is gnawing me
Poignant feeling so hard to bear
It got me deeply
Have i deserved it that much?

Crying, crying, and crying
No more tears left
I felt salty like oceans
Which is burning me, and people around

I caught up in fluctuation, up and down
Coming and going, such a tide
I smashed to smithereens
Will i ever get over?

It shouldn't be a big deal
But this time, it is different
Such a damage, i can't get rid of
One day, will be remembered with a bitter smile
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stevepoet
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 46
1 posted 2006-12-02 04:49 PM

very good.good descriptions.please read mine and give feedback, thanks
Steve
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