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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-12-02 04:21 AM


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life's endless journey

all roads blend into circles

destiny's shadow


©2006 by icebox
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© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-02 04:31 AM


this is beautifully penned..

Be well
Roniece

iliana
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2 posted 2006-12-02 04:33 AM


Either you're up very late or very early...oh, but then, it is as you said...a circle.     Enjoyed this and wish I could get in here more frequently to post.  
Honeybunch
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3 posted 2006-12-02 08:10 AM


No wonder we're all going a bit crazy - it's "them there" circles!  Good write as usual, icebox!
stevepoet
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4 posted 2006-12-02 08:18 AM


very nice.good usage of words.Please critique mine,its down the page,thanks.
Steve

Martie
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5 posted 2006-12-02 09:59 AM


icebox...I wear a bracelet ingraved with "circles are forever"  

came back to change my spelling to engraved...sigh!  I told those doctors to put in a spell check.

[This message has been edited by Martie (12-03-2006 10:50 AM).]

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2006-12-02 10:41 AM


... and still a dream it remains ...

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

MGROVES
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7 posted 2006-12-02 05:46 PM


thanks alot, to the circle's you all have created~
trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2006-12-03 12:53 PM


Ahh this writing is very true..

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



The Lady
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9 posted 2006-12-03 01:40 AM




beautiful circle journey icebox
nice thoughts to sleep on...

good night

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
10 posted 2006-12-03 12:21 PM


Hi, my first read of yours I think, I've been gone awhile. I like this, and its kind of appropriate for me right now.
Thanks
Sandra

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