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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-12-01 01:30 PM

~There she is, November's moon, hanging in December's sky~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-12-01 01:48 PM

Indeed. A song of remembering, a new song of hope.
Lovely this..
Lovely you.

~Wishing you the happiest of holidays.~

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

2 posted 2006-12-01 01:48 PM

I love this..very elegant words for the moon

kingsangel

MsSouthernOrchid
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Posts 192

3 posted 2006-12-01 01:57 PM

Marge, this is beautiful.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-12-01 02:21 PM

Well now, how lovely is this?!
hugging you Marge. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-12-01 02:22 PM

Marge/sis...I saw her last night and thought of you, really I did, because you love the moon I know and that cut in half one is special, isn't it? So are you!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-12-01 02:24 PM

This is so beautiful Marge...December has surely slipped in slowly. Hugs.

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

7 posted 2006-12-01 03:28 PM

You do wonders with words, in shaping as well as writing. This is lovely.

A big snow storm ushered Northern Illinois' December in, closing schools, cancelling flights, etc. Temperatures were mid 60s Monday through Wednesday. What a change to be buried in cold fluff on Friday.

Rae

tek
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 32
Austin, USA

8 posted 2006-12-01 03:55 PM

very nice write here. and very clever putting it into a shape of the moon. i like.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2006-12-01 04:20 PM

Marge
Your talent is endless.

Margherita
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Eternity

10 posted 2006-12-01 07:07 PM

What a beautiful crescent moon accompanied by your equally beautiful words.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

11 posted 2006-12-01 08:38 PM

I love it

jody5
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since 2005-12-21

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California, U.S.A.

12 posted 2006-12-01 11:57 PM

Marge, This is especially beautiful on this December Holiday. I hope your season is as wonderful as your poetry.

Hugs Kimberly

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

13 posted 2006-12-02 01:25 AM

Yellow hibiscus and now a yellow moon too? Your pretty words do it justice. Love, Joyce

latteaddict213

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since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

14 posted 2006-12-02 08:32 PM

very nice word useage

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

15 posted 2006-12-02 08:36 PM

This poem was very soothing for my stressful day

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

16 posted 2006-12-02 11:47 PM

I agree!! very soothing words here... enjoyed!

Be well
Roniece

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2006-12-02 11:59 PM

Marge, did you hear, ever, someone tell us
in whispered time
that moments would pass so swiftly....

that we had to reach for the ring
every moment?

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

18 posted 2006-12-03 12:47 PM

lovely Marge

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2006-12-03 08:42 AM

Thank you ALL so very kindly for the sweetness of your replies~

'whispered time' ... oh, yes ... I have heard ... and so I reach to gather the memories to hold onto~

Those of you who have come to know me, know that the moon and I are magnetically drawn together ... she preens and sashays across my sky ... I lens-capture her and marry her with my worded-thoughts ... thus, she stays with us long after the phasing of the month is gone ... then ... then ... she begins again~

(Oh wow ... look at me get all nostalgic on ya')

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

20 posted 2006-12-03 01:12 PM

Oh what beautiful words fall from your pen

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11

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Oklahoma, USA

21 posted 2006-12-03 01:36 PM

Wonderful! Lovely as always. Take care and Have fun. Steve

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

22 posted 2006-12-04 09:59 AM

Humble thanks ... you all give me such rich rewards for my little poetic shares~
Thank you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

23 posted 2007-05-14 05:56 PM

lovely, lovely, lovely.

and how you just wrote something like this when everyone else(including me)ignored such a facinating scene.

wow!!

love

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