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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-12-01 01:27 PM


I tried,
and I cried
and I kicked
and I screamed
too many messages
within too many dreams

and you tell me
it's never too late
as I sit here
bleeding for a
strangers fate

like a fox in a box
or an Angel in the corner
they all say
"we tried to warn her"

time quickly ticking
the hours away
I wish I could believe
that it's not too late



kingsangel

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-12-01 01:53 PM


Julie~
This is a puzzling piece to me~
Can you email me with a little enlightment on it what it actually refers to ?

Thanks muchly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2006-12-01 01:57 PM


Marge~~~thank you and yes I will....it might help actually....

kingsangel

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-01 02:10 PM


Its never too late...

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-12-01 05:18 PM


Do you want to believe...James
Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2006-12-01 08:53 PM


thank you interloper....

James...it's hard sometimes....

kingsangel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2006-12-02 01:57 AM


and you tell me
it's never too late
as I sit here
bleeding for a
strangers fate


these words are powerful.... enjoyed this

Be well
Roniece

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