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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-12-01 09:29 AM


It was just ... a little fish

flapping in my hands for free

slippery

and delicate

with flirting little eyelashes

I felt her gasping urgency

squirming through my fingers clasped

loosely round her as I ran

to where I thought the water was--

someplace far away from me

down a corridor and lines

of people

standing in our way

didn't stand a chance and they

were mean to me

as I ran fast

to freedom

underneath

the glass

laughing

as I made a splash

just before I swam away--

flippant fins

of protocol

wishing that I had an ass

for them to kiss goodbye...


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2006-12-01 10:08 AM


too funny
and loveeeeeee the new pic

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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-12-01 10:32 AM


Bravo! As Stevie Nicks once sang "have you any dreams you'd like to sell?"
Karen, my Karen, your new picture is just perfect!
hugs, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-01 10:38 AM


BRAVA

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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2006-12-01 11:06 AM


serenity  
Tish, Tish you saved a fish.

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