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Waters of Time
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Waters of Time |
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cwilk55 Junior Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 17OR |
Waters of time... Droplet by Droplet Drip Drip Drip in to this Life The measure of my Life Determined upon the Fill Line on the Alabaster Bowl... Drip Drip Drip The hours/years announced by the evolving paraphenalia of the ages... The level receding... Life receding Drop by Drop until The Last glistening Droplet suspends upon the Jewel Point... a moment lets go... Drops joining with the waters below... Filled to the Fill Line as it counts the Time... Droplet by Droplet Drip... Drip... Drip... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lovely entrance. Welcome to Passions. A talented write. TD |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome and thank you for sharing. Enjoyed. |
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Obscurity Member
since 2003-12-04
Posts 153In A Melancholic Dream |
Welcome. I enjoyed the poem very much very well written, I can't say I enjoyed the visual effects but it did add texture  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Candy! What a great surprise. I'm thrilled you joined. Welcome to Passions. I love this place and your presence can only make it better. More please. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Welcome to passions! What an interesting way to describe life, I'm not sure I've ever heard it described in that way before. It has certainly given me a lot to think about. Thanks a bunch for sharing!  "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! A great entrance piece you have gifted us with! Love the presentation as well. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
What a delightful entrance, welcome, any friend of Larry's must be a friend indeed. (He has such amazing talent, I'm sure all his friends do), and this definitely shows talent. The flow, the form are delightful and rather special, I'm sure you will love it here. as always Mushy (all my friends call me that) Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you've begun with a beautiful piece Candy welcome I look forward to more of your work... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
until The Last glistening Droplet suspends upon the Jewel Point... a moment lets go... Drops joining with the waters below... Filled to the Fill Line as it counts the Time... Welcome to PIP, what a tremendous entrance, comparing all the moments in life to water dropping, faster and faster as we grown older, until.... Your going to fit right in.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I think I've found just the very way to ask you to check your Email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Candace~ WELCOME to PiP ... your entrance piece has captured and enraptured me~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to pip....Looking forward to more! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS.........enjoy your time here.... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Welcome to Pip! What a lovely first piece, I hope to read more from you soon!  ~Alli~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"by the evolving paraphenalia of the ages..." I adore this line. Yes indeed ... that "evolving paraphenalia" in our lives, I do know it well ... sometimes welcomed and sometimes ... not. And I would also like to extend a warm greeting to you ... Welcome to Passions! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The presentation of words dripping down the page was very effective in portraying the waters of time running out. Hi! ~ and welcome to the pip family of kindred poets! Your debut poem was impressive! Warm, welcoming hug, Earth Angel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A beautiful entrance, Welcome to Passions. I hope you enjoy your time here. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Sheesh, I was still looking at the sandgrains left to fall through that hour glass of life. Now our planet's heating up, and we're dripping away. Seriously, I enjoyed your piece. Warm welcome! Rae |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Nicely written! Welcome! I hope you'll enjoy the Blue Pages as much as I have. Hope to see more of your writing... misc |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful and welcome to the passion |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Welkom to the pip dear I am an old Lady from holland '95 years and my Engels is bad "ask Larry. I hope you have a nice time with the ring of love.  Muys |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Hi,cwilk55.. Welcome friend of my first born! (Larry will have to explain that one.)I just arrived home from an exceptional vacation week and this is the first poem I opened. What a nice first poem to PIP. Thank, you martyjo |
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cwilk55 Junior Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 17OR |
Everyone has been so kind with their feed back on this piece! I am overwhelmed with your generosity. I've kept my stuff mostly to myself for years but Larry C. has gently but firmly encouraged me to post. I'm so glad I did, and did I say thanks for being kind?! Candy |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Okay, so that's a good start. We'll see more, right?  And thanks everybody, cause you really are kind. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Welcome! I love this work, very original. I look forward to seeing more of your creativity. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
For those of you that don't get to the Prose Forum Candy has new postings there: An Early Life Lesson Ironing If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ing for a friend~~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hi Candy  I'm happy to welcome you to Passions! I enjoyed this first post and glad it got bumped up again! Looking forward to more! |
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